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These were the entries for the mid-January poetry prompt over at icon:#Movement-&-Space

*StormBringer23 won extra brownie points for combining ALL THREE sets of words in a very creative way: Glitter a gorgeous red carpet affair
standard but only in its making
until wind destroyed all the hair
just the heavy was left from its taking

yeah, sheen was there, in his usual state
he was grumolmpy looking and gray
and jesse helm too, by act or by fate
same old puddeth personality today

not only the props and the sound booms
were crushed in the winds mighty squirning
the stars fell too, ruining spendy costumes
a mere pittance of the big nights gross earning



~SilverWynd made the end of the world seem tragically beautiful in her poem: The Beauty of the End Be still my heart
go gentle into the goodnight
stirred by the dying wind
of winter.

I woke from a dream
and my breath caught
as two moons now
hovered in the sky.

A memory of your eyes
from far away in another life
and I knew at that moment
I stood at the helm of the
end of the world.

It was beautiful in its
strange unyielding way
which crushed my breath

And the stars began to fall
from the sky, time slowed
and I was overawed as they
appeared like jellyfish floating
through eternity.

Do you remember
standing on the edge
of everything watching
the buildings begin to crumble?

We danced through
hailstorms an



~InTheStarryNightSky provided a lovely poem of the stars falling into the sea: The Stars The wind has been blowing for no end it seems
As we seafarers dash to and fro
On our little ship

But then, it all stopped
We must have entered the doldrums
But there was something more

"Look!" Came a cry from the helm
I looked
And what did I see?

Lights streaking across the sky
Illuminating the dark in little stripes
And winding their way down to the sea

I saw them fall into the oceans waters
And fall into the deepest depths
That no man would ever venture to

I saw the trails of crushed dust settle on the moon
And spheres break through the clouds
Glittering all the way down

What did I see?
I saw the stars
As they fell



and  ~MysticKenji gave us intriguing pieces of thoughts in Fragments of Conversations "Well, it's the standard path, you know,
t-the standard path.
The one most of us walk.
I know you want to move on your own,
but think of us every once in a while.

Okay?"

"Yeah, yeah, we all have our weights,
and they even come in all sorts
of colors and shapes.
Don't you see mine?
Don't you know your own?"

"You want to bear the weight of the world?
Ha! You must want to die early.
Don't be in such a rush to be crushed
by a heavy weight, or you really will go insane."

"Okay. Good luck."

"Well, aren't you shining on and on?
With your sheen, you could blind the sun."

"Your luster is nothing yet.
Don't even think about things li


Check them out!

I was supposed to feature them mid-January, but I missed it... I haven't done much of anything on here for awhile, but these did deserve a feature.
  • Listening to: Scarlatti's Fuga en Do Mineur, Kk. 58

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~Dweran Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, thanks :)
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You are most welcome!

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Merry Christmas! ;)

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~Dweran Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!

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Welcome.

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~Dweran Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Vous n'êtes la bienvenue! L'arbre apparaît solitaire et mystique, très impressionnant.:)
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